Thursday, May 1, 2014

Cincinnatus the hero!

CINCINNATUS

Far far away lies ROME. Long ago when it was small, there was a man named Cincinnatus. He was very rich, but lost all his money. So he planted with his hands.  He was very wise. If someone had a problem a neighbour would say “Go tell Cincinnatus. He is very wise.”
In the city every man was a soldier. There was a wild tribe that always came down a mountain pass and then stole from the city. The Romans set a army up to battle them. It marched up the pass, but the wild people prepared a trap.
 Awhile after two horse men came rushing into Rome. Lots of people followed them to the white haired fathers. One of the horse men said “We were walking in the path. It was a very thin pathway with walls along the path.” Then the other one said “The wild people set a trap and blocked up all of the pathway They were all around us. Five of us escaped. Five pushed their way through and five … uh died.”

The white haired fathers said “We need someone wise enough to lead the guards and boys into battle.” Someone said “Go get Cincinnatus. He is very wise.” So they went to Cincinnatus. Cincinnatus saw them in the distance. He politely waited for them to speak. The horse man said “Put on your cloak Cincinnatus and please lead the guards and boys into battle.” Cincinnatus called his wife to get him his cloak “I will go” he said. He chased all of the wild people back into their country. They won a great victory. Cincinnatus was ruler for 16 days because after 16 day he gave power back to the white haired fathers.

THE END…..
CREDITS:
Director: The buttery toast/luke
Actors???!!!!!: none!!!!! This is a story!!!!!

Original by james Baldwin













I wanna make this a movie :D meet me on minecraft username: SUPEREPICGUI but I will change it to TheButteryToast599

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