Thursday, October 24, 2013

Classical Writing work G0LDY L0CKS AND THE 3 BEARS (i wish there was 33 :3)

                           GOLDY LOCKS AND THE 3 BEARS


Goldy-Locks had very yellow hair and one day she asked her mother to pick flowers. Her mother said “Ok, only if you don’t go into the deep forest”. She was a thoughtless little girl so she ran and ran into the deep forest picking flowers until she saw she was in the deep forest.

She found a house. She ran in and saw three bowls of porridge. She tasted the big one. It was too salty. She tasted the medium bowl, but it was too sour. So she tasted the smallest bowl. It was just right and she soon ate it all up. Then she saw three chairs. She sat on the biggest. It was too high. She sat on the medium chair. It was too low. Then she sat on the smallest chair. It was just right, but soon it broke. And then she saw three beds. The biggest bed was too hard, the medium bed was too soft, but the smallest bed was just right and she soon fell asleep.

The bears came home and they saw their door open so they rushed in. The biggest bear said “Someone has been eating my porridge”. Then the medium bear said “Someone has been eating my porridge”. Then the smallest bear said “Someone has been eating my porridge and has eaten it all up!

They saw their chairs. The biggest bear said “Someone has been sitting in my chair”.  Then the medium bear said “Someone has been sitting in my chair”. Then the smallest bear said “Someone has been sitting in my chair and broke it all to pieces!

They went upstairs and saw their beds. The biggest bear said “Someone has been laying in my bed”. Then the medium bear said “Someone has been laying in my bed”. Then the smallest bear said “Someone has been laying in my bed and here she is”!


Goldy-Locks woke up she saw the bears looking angrily at her. She ran to the window and jumped out and ran all the way home and told her mother a naughty girl she was.  

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